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holy shit i love raspberry! 

wow wow wow

isa youve dome it again. 

saden is a perfect execution of a Type of Girl that many of your readers are or have been. this is the power fantasy of that Type of Girl. a world where if you're angry and cruel enough you can take what you want. you can do anything, because you are better than these vermin in every way and the world bends towards your victory. soon every wish-fulfillment story will be for megalomaniacgirls.

all that is to say: yeah thats what i woulda done

amazing work ... i wanna give saden a noogie

This was truly delicious toxicity. I love evil obsessive sword yuri. Saden was a really compelling character to me, her hatred masking her self-loathing and inadequacies, the constant fantasising, but never doing what she actually wants, the gender envy (evil envy?) towards Vivu… I fear becoming like her one day.

Really like how video gamey this feels – the visuals (especially the excellent BGs) and the worldbuilding give off this obscure RPG vibe. I think it neatly highlights Saden’s perception of the world as just a fantasy sandbox to go on a rampage in while ignoring the overarching story that Ingrislia really wants her to follow in a making-your-own-fun kinda way.

Great game. It definitely made me go "ooooo" throughout my playthrough.

peak sword yuri

Overall amazing job to both of you!! I really liked how sadistic Saden was in viewing this fantasy world as a canvas to project her hatred with the real world, and how her personality clashed with Ingrislia’s. Also liked how the spicy scenes progressed from sensual to bitter to vitriolic and back again.

The art for the characters is adorable and the UI reminds me of old school fantasy games which lends itself well to the world. I also liked the detail of the “burning” in the back of Saden’s mind literally growing brighter and brighter.

I do feel it was a tad difficult to keep up with the exposition of magic and the greater lore of the world such as with the Ilumar and prophecies, but Saden’s obsession and growing hatred of Vivu was the star of the show. It was very raw and compelling and really propelled the story forward imo. Great job again!!!